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"But the worth of a boat'S IN how well it floats."
"I was well aware of all the facts / And despite the proof I have now to choose"
Maybe "I continue bearing this lack"? That line's really tough.
Maybe "And here I sit exposed to the tide, Old Ironsides"?
"And when push ALWAYS comes to shove."
"I walk outside an put on"? It's not "set off".
"But the worth of a boat'S IN how well it floats."
"I was well aware of all the facts / And despite the proof I have now to choose"
Maybe "I continue bearing this lack"? That line's really tough.
Maybe "And here I sit exposed to the tide, Old Ironsides"?
"And when push ALWAYS comes to shove."
"I walk outside an put on"? It's not "set off".