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'theirs' is a misspelling, it should there there's, as in 'there is'.
I also think that; '..clock is right it's a bad time Because you crushed our love'
is wrong, it doesn't sound like it all. Though I can't offer much in terms of correction.
I think that it's:
"They say that if the tide is right it's a bad time"
I can't really tell what the next line is, though.
'theirs' is a misspelling, it should there there's, as in 'there is'.
I also think that; '..clock is right it's a bad time Because you crushed our love'
is wrong, it doesn't sound like it all. Though I can't offer much in terms of correction.
I think that it's:
I think that it's:
"They say that if the tide is right it's a bad time"
"They say that if the tide is right it's a bad time"
I can't really tell what the next line is, though.
I can't really tell what the next line is, though.