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At first listen I didn't go gaga for it. But after hearing it several times this song really grew on me.
There is two lines in the song that needs to be fixed: 1) You're only an older noose lose on my throat (This doesn't sound right at all)
You're only an ??? lose on my throat (This lyrically sounds better but I can't make out that one word)
2) Whether a flower in my hand or a gun in my hand
With every flower in my hand or a gun in my hand
At first listen I didn't go gaga for it. But after hearing it several times this song really grew on me.
There is two lines in the song that needs to be fixed: 1) You're only an older noose lose on my throat (This doesn't sound right at all)
You're only an ??? lose on my throat (This lyrically sounds better but I can't make out that one word)
2) Whether a flower in my hand or a gun in my hand
With every flower in my hand or a gun in my hand