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"What's under me" should be "What's underneath"
two lines later, it should be "Betrayed you're an image, oh precious creation. You will submit, you will give in."
in the second verse, "You're so very clear" should be "It's all very clear."
"What's under me" should be "What's underneath"
two lines later, it should be "Betrayed you're an image, oh precious creation. You will submit, you will give in."
in the second verse, "You're so very clear" should be "It's all very clear."