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A few corrections:
nonchalant, not non-nonchalant
moonlit boulevard
a keepsake to forever more say, that a brief taste of love is as sweet as any
Juliet, not Juliette
on rivers of ribbon and sailboats of song (Bret? Did any of this actually happen?)
Thanks. Fixed
A few corrections:
nonchalant, not non-nonchalant
moonlit boulevard
a keepsake to forever more say, that a brief taste of love is as sweet as any
Juliet, not Juliette
on rivers of ribbon and sailboats of song (Bret? Did any of this actually happen?)
Thanks. Fixed
Thanks. Fixed