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A few corrections
South san Gabriel
Copper wire sunset
And the last chorus seems kind of out of wack
Been fake We're out to take A place that's safe That you might wait a day
A lonesome broken dawn That finally comes Just as I was losing faith You keep every promise you make
Other than that, awesome job :) High five!
Thanks! And I edited in your corrections, thanks for that and high five back! :)
A few corrections
South san Gabriel
Copper wire sunset
And the last chorus seems kind of out of wack
Been fake We're out to take A place that's safe That you might wait a day
A lonesome broken dawn That finally comes Just as I was losing faith You keep every promise you make
Other than that, awesome job :) High five!
Thanks! And I edited in your corrections, thanks for that and high five back! :)
Thanks! And I edited in your corrections, thanks for that and high five back! :)