Voilà , this is what I could correct in the translation :) Though there wasn't that much to change :
We loved each other tenderly
Like all lovers love each others
Then one day you left me
Ever since I've been desperate
I see you everywhere in the sky
I see you everywhere on the earth
You are my joy and my sun
My night, my days, my clear dawns
You are everywhere because you are in my heart
You are everywhere because you are my happiness
Everything that is around me
Even life only represents you
Sometimes I dream that I am in your arms
And you speak softly in my ear
You tell me things that make me close my eyes
And I find that marvellous
Maybe one day you will return
I know that my heart will wait for you
You will not be able to forget
The days we have spent together
My eyes never stop searching for you
Listen well, my heart calls you
We could love each other so nicely
And you'll see life will be beautiful
You are everywhere because you are in my heart
You are everywhere because you are my happiness
Everything that is around me
Even life only represents you
Sometimes I dream that I am in your arms
And you speak softly in my ear
You tell me things that make me close my eyes
And I find that marvellous
Voilà , this is what I could correct in the translation :) Though there wasn't that much to change :
We loved each other tenderly Like all lovers love each others Then one day you left me Ever since I've been desperate I see you everywhere in the sky I see you everywhere on the earth You are my joy and my sun My night, my days, my clear dawns
You are everywhere because you are in my heart You are everywhere because you are my happiness Everything that is around me Even life only represents you Sometimes I dream that I am in your arms And you speak softly in my ear You tell me things that make me close my eyes And I find that marvellous
Maybe one day you will return I know that my heart will wait for you You will not be able to forget The days we have spent together My eyes never stop searching for you Listen well, my heart calls you We could love each other so nicely And you'll see life will be beautiful
You are everywhere because you are in my heart You are everywhere because you are my happiness Everything that is around me Even life only represents you Sometimes I dream that I am in your arms And you speak softly in my ear You tell me things that make me close my eyes And I find that marvellous