The word 'today' is missing from the line "twenty-five men had their way with you [today]"
The word 'about' is missing from the line "there was someone at home you cared [about]"
The verb 'take' is missing from "why could they [take] a spoon and break your teeth"
The word 'today' is missing from the line "twenty-five men [today] had their way in you"
The line "Nothing is worse than to be born and live" is missing after "burned upon the feet with a cigarette"
I think in the penultimate line it might be the preposition 'at' instead of the conjunction 'and', i.e. "you will die and die [at] Falkland Road". At least that's what it sounds like to me. And makes more sense. What do others think?
The word 'today' is missing from the line "twenty-five men had their way with you [today]"
The word 'about' is missing from the line "there was someone at home you cared [about]"
The verb 'take' is missing from "why could they [take] a spoon and break your teeth"
The word 'today' is missing from the line "twenty-five men [today] had their way in you"
The line "Nothing is worse than to be born and live" is missing after "burned upon the feet with a cigarette"
I think in the penultimate line it might be the preposition 'at' instead of the conjunction 'and', i.e. "you will die and die [at] Falkland Road". At least that's what it sounds like to me. And makes more sense. What do others think?