Edited, because the site didn't allow edits before. I probably copy and pasted from another site without double checking, but you're right, those make more sense.
Edited, because the site didn't allow edits before. I probably copy and pasted from another site without double checking, but you're right, those make more sense.
I think that "Straight by south are tears"
Is actually "Streaked by sapphire tears"
And "That the view from here is a rock of a clear"
is "That the view from here is remarkably clear"
Makes more sense, right?
Four years later...
Four years later...
Edited, because the site didn't allow edits before. I probably copy and pasted from another site without double checking, but you're right, those make more sense.
Edited, because the site didn't allow edits before. I probably copy and pasted from another site without double checking, but you're right, those make more sense.