The Drying of the Lawns

There are quite a few mistakes here, but I'll only comment upon a couple I am pretty certain are off:

"As when I set my eyes and torched the plans on the mark of you" should instead be "As when I set my eyes on torched up lands of the mark of you"

And "If pain and awful romance then this mornin' is for us" should instead be "If evenings are for romance, then this morning is for us"

:)