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"Bright the sun, the day is almost done" should be "Bright the sun, the day is almost gone" "The time is closing, in let the sleep begin" should be "The time is closing in, let the sleep begin"
"Bright the sun, the day is almost done" should be "Bright the sun, the day is almost gone" "The time is closing, in let the sleep begin" should be "The time is closing in, let the sleep begin"