Not really a correction, but perhaps just a missed punctuation. I think a comma (first line only) should be placed:
"Write me down my love.
Write me down your love."
with
"Write me down, my love.
Write me down your love."
Although these lines are identical, aside from the words "my" and "your", I feel like they have different underlying messages:
"write me down, my love" -- please recognize what i am to you. validate me by 'writing me down' in your head and accepting who or what i am (maybe your true love?).
"write me down your love" -- now that you know who i am (your true love?), can you write down all about your feelings/love for me?
I'm also thinking about the line: "Open up my love". This line could be read in 2 ways:
"open up, my love" -- stop being closed up and open up your heart by giving into it, my love.
"open up my love" -- ive been closed up, too. i want you to open up my heart.
It could be go either ways, but maybe it's meant to be read both ways in alternating sequence? omg, am I looking WAYY too hard into this? lol what the hell...i'm really stoned and just realized this is stupidly long time to have been spent analyzing a comma.
Funny you should point that out. Today i had an oral on poetry and i got poem from Guillaume Apollinaire who didn't use punctuation in his poems. This allows some aspects to be interpreted in very different ways. So i guess studying the punctuation isn't a complete waste of time... :)
Funny you should point that out. Today i had an oral on poetry and i got poem from Guillaume Apollinaire who didn't use punctuation in his poems. This allows some aspects to be interpreted in very different ways. So i guess studying the punctuation isn't a complete waste of time... :)
Not really a correction, but perhaps just a missed punctuation. I think a comma (first line only) should be placed:
"Write me down my love. Write me down your love."
with
"Write me down, my love. Write me down your love."
Although these lines are identical, aside from the words "my" and "your", I feel like they have different underlying messages: "write me down, my love" -- please recognize what i am to you. validate me by 'writing me down' in your head and accepting who or what i am (maybe your true love?). "write me down your love" -- now that you know who i am (your true love?), can you write down all about your feelings/love for me?
I'm also thinking about the line: "Open up my love". This line could be read in 2 ways:
"open up, my love" -- stop being closed up and open up your heart by giving into it, my love. "open up my love" -- ive been closed up, too. i want you to open up my heart.
It could be go either ways, but maybe it's meant to be read both ways in alternating sequence? omg, am I looking WAYY too hard into this? lol what the hell...i'm really stoned and just realized this is stupidly long time to have been spent analyzing a comma.
Funny you should point that out. Today i had an oral on poetry and i got poem from Guillaume Apollinaire who didn't use punctuation in his poems. This allows some aspects to be interpreted in very different ways. So i guess studying the punctuation isn't a complete waste of time... :)
Funny you should point that out. Today i had an oral on poetry and i got poem from Guillaume Apollinaire who didn't use punctuation in his poems. This allows some aspects to be interpreted in very different ways. So i guess studying the punctuation isn't a complete waste of time... :)