A Lunatic's Lament

A few corrections

Just the sight of you has made me safe tonight should be Just the sight of you has made me sick tonight

We can count the stars that disappear should be We can count the stars and disappear

The nightmare's coming true... It will only be you... Did it ever burn? should be The nightmare's coming true... It was all for you... I did it all for you

but rather it is in my opinion only qualified by approximating to heaven and hell. should be but rather it is in my opinion only quantified by his proximity to heaven and hell.

I was in such a state that I ushered myself past the town tavern, bursting into scenes of the sounds of laughter and drunken people playing. should be It was in such a state that I ushered myself past the town tavern, bursting at the seams with the sounds of laughter and drunken piano playing.

The events that transpired there would never have even begun to be grasped by the feat. should be The events that transpired at that point would have undoubtedly been drastically different.

I could only ask if anyone outside that place had a clue when the exlamations of mirth became the desperate screams of the helpless, begging for their very lives. should be I can only guess if anyone outside that place had a clue when the exclamations of mirth became the desperate screams of the helpless begging for their very lives.