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Ok, just what I think you messed up on.
Through smeared mascara, I looked into your eyes, I saw a light I think it is "and saw a light"
John the lifeguard, he let them use the pool all day for free "You charmed the lifeguard" I think.
If you're wondering if I want you, (I want you to) I want you to Should be "if I want you to, (I want you to)"
/2cents
Ok, just what I think you messed up on.
Through smeared mascara, I looked into your eyes, I saw a light I think it is "and saw a light"
John the lifeguard, he let them use the pool all day for free "You charmed the lifeguard" I think.
If you're wondering if I want you, (I want you to) I want you to Should be "if I want you to, (I want you to)"
/2cents