I can't decide if these lyrics are cheesy, but I thoroughly enjoy the song, as well as singing it to my fiancee. I wonder if the full song will contain more verses, though, as this feels... unfinished.
Or it could be like the Pendulum song Hold Your Colour, where their remix of it, the "Bipolar Vocal Mix," changes the lyrics to continue fleshing out the ideas presented in the album version, all while jacking up the song to new levels of energy and awesome.
I can't decide if these lyrics are cheesy, but I thoroughly enjoy the song, as well as singing it to my fiancee. I wonder if the full song will contain more verses, though, as this feels... unfinished.
Or it could be like the Pendulum song Hold Your Colour, where their remix of it, the "Bipolar Vocal Mix," changes the lyrics to continue fleshing out the ideas presented in the album version, all while jacking up the song to new levels of energy and awesome.