i agree with all of yr corrections and have one of my own.
the last line isn't "i am moving away from you"
it's "and i am willing to wait for you"
makes a lot more sense considering he "feels that what they have is real" instead of jumping from oh i love you to oh i'm moving on.
i agree with all of yr corrections and have one of my own. the last line isn't "i am moving away from you" it's "and i am willing to wait for you" makes a lot more sense considering he "feels that what they have is real" instead of jumping from oh i love you to oh i'm moving on.