A few problems with the first part of translation here. It should be a bit more like:
Come with me,
come into my house (manor, castle)
There is fun
in the basement
Quiet, quiet,
we need to be
(for)Just a second
A moment in time
Yes, Paradise
lies under the house
The door slams (tumbles, fall) in
The light goes out
Are you ready?
Are you set?
Welcome....
To the gloom (darkness, blackness, murk, lots of words that this could be translated as)
To the gloom
A few problems with the first part of translation here. It should be a bit more like: Come with me, come into my house (manor, castle) There is fun in the basement
Quiet, quiet, we need to be (for)Just a second A moment in time
Yes, Paradise lies under the house The door slams (tumbles, fall) in The light goes out
Are you ready? Are you set? Welcome.... To the gloom (darkness, blackness, murk, lots of words that this could be translated as) To the gloom
Most of the rest of it's right, so good job! :D