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you added an extra word in the first line. should be
I'm sorry to say I didn't know her name
second to last quatrain. I think it's
If we'd thought a bit about the end of it as we started painting the town
how do you get "bust up" in there?
you added an extra word in the first line. should be
I'm sorry to say I didn't know her name
second to last quatrain. I think it's
If we'd thought a bit about the end of it as we started painting the town
how do you get "bust up" in there?