[The sun is just a hole, it is the light outside]
Should be "The sun is just a hole, what is the light outside?"
[I love you most, the summer now it has to end]
Should be "I loved you most in summer, now it has to end"
[I'd run a million miles if you were first prize]
Should be "I'd run a million miles if you weren't first prize"
Here's my try at the choruses:
No one save me: go on, take it slowly
Come on! Someone figure it out
Why there's no one that can save me now
No one save me: go on, take it slowly
Come on! Someone figure it out
Why there's no one that can save me now
Why there's no one that can save me now
No one save me: go on, take it slowly
Come on! Someone figure it out
Why there's no one that can save me now
Why there's no one that can save me now
Why there's no one that can save me now
A few small corrections:
[The sun is just a hole, it is the light outside] Should be "The sun is just a hole, what is the light outside?"
[I love you most, the summer now it has to end] Should be "I loved you most in summer, now it has to end"
[I'd run a million miles if you were first prize] Should be "I'd run a million miles if you weren't first prize"
Here's my try at the choruses:
No one save me: go on, take it slowly Come on! Someone figure it out Why there's no one that can save me now
No one save me: go on, take it slowly Come on! Someone figure it out Why there's no one that can save me now Why there's no one that can save me now
No one save me: go on, take it slowly Come on! Someone figure it out Why there's no one that can save me now Why there's no one that can save me now Why there's no one that can save me now
i think your right...
i think your right...
except for this
except for this
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im pretty sure its "were"
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im pretty sure its "were"