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Love this song - so sad.
I'm sure this is the wrong way to do this, but it's a while since I've been here...
'moped' should be 'mopped',
'there's suitcase' should be 'there's a suitcase'
'wife involved in a ' should be 'wife been involved in a'.
Thanks for posting - just minor things that affect how it scans.
Helen
Love this song - so sad.
I'm sure this is the wrong way to do this, but it's a while since I've been here...
'moped' should be 'mopped',
'there's suitcase' should be 'there's a suitcase'
'wife involved in a ' should be 'wife been involved in a'.
Thanks for posting - just minor things that affect how it scans.
Helen
Helen