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There are so many mistakes in this.
it should be
"on bright yellow fields" not "some bright yellow fear."
"so tell me where I can run" not "so tell me where i can walk"
"i'm still the same mom" is not supposed to have "mom"
"and burn out eyes so we cant look back" not "and burn a ride so we cant look back."
"Last night I inspired the poison so I can die again" not "Left by...the poison so i can die again"
"the time to receive you" not "the time to save you"
"to lose myself again" not "So i can save myself again"
There are so many mistakes in this.
it should be
"on bright yellow fields" not "some bright yellow fear."
"so tell me where I can run" not "so tell me where i can walk"
"i'm still the same mom" is not supposed to have "mom"
"and burn out eyes so we cant look back" not "and burn a ride so we cant look back."
"Last night I inspired the poison so I can die again" not "Left by...the poison so i can die again"
"the time to receive you" not "the time to save you"
"to lose myself again" not "So i can save myself again"