'They all come to impact he's so eager to please'
should be
'They all come to him cause he's so eager to please'
&&
'He crafts every one with love and repair'
should be
'He crafts everyone with love and with care'
&&
'Then its thrown in the ground and it just doesn't fit'
should be
'Then it's thrown in the ground it just isn't fair'
'They all come to impact he's so eager to please' should be 'They all come to him cause he's so eager to please' && 'He crafts every one with love and repair' should be 'He crafts everyone with love and with care' && 'Then its thrown in the ground and it just doesn't fit' should be 'Then it's thrown in the ground it just isn't fair'
you should probably change it dear. ox