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Few corrections.
It should be "you're" not "your" in the title, before "changing the Earth" and in the lines with "turning into John Wayne".
I�ve just heard of a rumor your culture spreads and then it pollutes
Should be: 'Cause I've just heard of a rumour all cultures spread and then they pollute
I think that: Please try no to take it personal I'm only going on the blatant truth
Should be (not sure): Please try, don't take it personal I'm only going on the blatant proof
You made in the USA
Should be: Are you made in the USA?
My corrections are for the Vivarium version, at least. I dunno if there's a demo version and what the lyrics are like for it.
Great song, anyhow =]
Few corrections.
It should be "you're" not "your" in the title, before "changing the Earth" and in the lines with "turning into John Wayne".
I�ve just heard of a rumor your culture spreads and then it pollutes
Should be: 'Cause I've just heard of a rumour all cultures spread and then they pollute
I think that: Please try no to take it personal I'm only going on the blatant truth
Should be (not sure): Please try, don't take it personal I'm only going on the blatant proof
You made in the USA
Should be: Are you made in the USA?
My corrections are for the Vivarium version, at least. I dunno if there's a demo version and what the lyrics are like for it.
Great song, anyhow =]