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I'd like to make a few corrections here...
"You can say goodbye" = You can say bye
"You've hit, crashed" = Cupid crashed (That would explain "now he's back")
Eloquent Rap: There are a few issues here:
"Full of agression and the tension leans" = Full of aggression and attention lately
"That's money, baby" = That's money, PAY ME
"Lady, you're pretty hard to handle" = Lately everybody's hard to hang (handle doesn't rhyme with boomerang)
"Screamin' loud and takin' face" = Screamin' loud until your face
"Jump and ram the brake lights" = Turns red like brake lights
"Battled to the skill" = Balanced on a scale
"It was a long race" = On the wrong and rights
"Remember ..." = I'm eloquent (where did remember come from?)
"We're goin' nowhere" = And I ain't goin' nowhere
"This ..." = This love affair
"We got plenty of flows" = Got plenty of flaws
"But I'm never gonna cheat or change" = But I'm never gonna Ch-Ch-Change
**I hope these things can be corrected. Bye now.
I'd like to make a few corrections here...
"You can say goodbye" = You can say bye
"You've hit, crashed" = Cupid crashed (That would explain "now he's back")
Eloquent Rap: There are a few issues here:
"Full of agression and the tension leans" = Full of aggression and attention lately
"That's money, baby" = That's money, PAY ME
"Lady, you're pretty hard to handle" = Lately everybody's hard to hang (handle doesn't rhyme with boomerang)
"Screamin' loud and takin' face" = Screamin' loud until your face
"Jump and ram the brake lights" = Turns red like brake lights
"Battled to the skill" = Balanced on a scale
"It was a long race" = On the wrong and rights
"Remember ..." = I'm eloquent (where did remember come from?)
"We're goin' nowhere" = And I ain't goin' nowhere
"This ..." = This love affair
"We got plenty of flows" = Got plenty of flaws
"But I'm never gonna cheat or change" = But I'm never gonna Ch-Ch-Change
**I hope these things can be corrected. Bye now.