I think the "that is us in the avenues" should be "what is lost, we never knew,"
and then the "never saw a avenue" should be "never saw what we never knew."
Also, "watching you, keep him on your side" sounds more like "watching you, watch the sky."
The rest I am amazed that you even figured out, props :)
I think you're VERY right on that! I don't know how I missed that, haha. And originally I had the end a bit different, but I must've changed it somewhere down the line.
I think you're VERY right on that! I don't know how I missed that, haha. And originally I had the end a bit different, but I must've changed it somewhere down the line.
Thank you very much for your input; you've helped make the lyrics more concise and gave it your own personal feel.
Thank you very much for your input; you've helped make the lyrics more concise and gave it your own personal feel.
I think the "that is us in the avenues" should be "what is lost, we never knew," and then the "never saw a avenue" should be "never saw what we never knew." Also, "watching you, keep him on your side" sounds more like "watching you, watch the sky."
The rest I am amazed that you even figured out, props :)
I think you're VERY right on that! I don't know how I missed that, haha. And originally I had the end a bit different, but I must've changed it somewhere down the line.
I think you're VERY right on that! I don't know how I missed that, haha. And originally I had the end a bit different, but I must've changed it somewhere down the line.
Thank you very much for your input; you've helped make the lyrics more concise and gave it your own personal feel.
Thank you very much for your input; you've helped make the lyrics more concise and gave it your own personal feel.