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Great song from the new album.
One mistake that I would correct:
"I want to pick up the pieces And plant them in the ground When a tree goes there I want to chop that tree down"
It should be "When a tree GROWN there", rather than goes. Good job with the lyrics though.
Great song from the new album.
One mistake that I would correct:
"I want to pick up the pieces And plant them in the ground When a tree goes there I want to chop that tree down"
It should be "When a tree GROWN there", rather than goes. Good job with the lyrics though.