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"I twitch and tweak allusion to sit and stare so blankly into our whole confused house." Sounds more like... "I twitch and tweak in illusion to sit and stare so blankly until (all/our) hope is used up."
"I twitch and tweak allusion to sit and stare so blankly into our whole confused house." Sounds more like... "I twitch and tweak in illusion to sit and stare so blankly until (all/our) hope is used up."