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line5: it should be "to A man" line9: i hear "...into your eyes full of dollar signs" line13: 'your' should be "you're" line16: latter should be "ladder" line17: i hear "...don't forget to thank the piggy bank..."
line5: it should be "to A man" line9: i hear "...into your eyes full of dollar signs" line13: 'your' should be "you're" line16: latter should be "ladder" line17: i hear "...don't forget to thank the piggy bank..."