Lyric discussion by equivalence 

Cover art for Black Swan lyrics by Sunset Rubdown

suggestions?

first 3 verses are right, the 4th verse should end with "the king of hearts" - he just says it weird.

the 5th verse i think is:

"there was the man who told the psychic he would have you if you could only give it up another way he has carved out an avenue you from the palace to the palisades and now he's half destroyed and you are half destroyed i said you're running down a washed out road i said you're running between, between the void"

but the first 2 lines i'm not sure about.

and...

thanks alot! many of those seem obvious now that you pointed them out, i just didn't hear it before. as for the king of hearts line, i mean it seems like he would say that but i feel like he distinctly says it differently than every other time he does in the song. but i changed it anyway.

the rest of your suggestions seem right except maybe the line "if you could only give it up another way". I can't hear it but it may be right, hopefully we can get some more feedback from someone else.

yeah I wasn't sure about that one either or the one right before it. but other than that I think we've got it.