A Rite of Passage

Oh, another minor adjustment;

Men of wealth and power, Influence and FAME (instead of fate)

The brotherhood of wisdom Stregnth and dignity (you mispelled STRENGTH)

And on your "greater sense" bit. I'm not completely sure. Could roll either way.

"A perfect world(,) a new, life has begun" Interpunction? <--------

Here we are, discussing a pre-released song. Mike Portnoy must hate us now 8D

Purely out of interest, how did you get your hands on this song?