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little corrections:
"a manner to act like a heart attack"
"the subway's only seven blocks away and it'll be there soon..." "keep on looking down at the paper with hope addressed..." ??
"i got two stitches in my eye"
little corrections:
"a manner to act like a heart attack"
"the subway's only seven blocks away and it'll be there soon..." "keep on looking down at the paper with hope addressed..." ??
"i got two stitches in my eye"