"my sense finally tune the instruments of-of-of" should be "my senses finely tune the instruments of-of-of"
"out of my mind, 'cause no lovin fair" should be "out of my mind, there's no love in there" -- it's the chorus, it's the same every time. It doesn't change on the last two.
and lastly, "I watch my toenails blacken and walk a deadened trance" I believe should be "I watch my toenails blacken and waltz* a deadened trance" but I'm not entirely about this one.
The first two corrections I am entirely positive about, though.
Couple of corrections:
"my sense finally tune the instruments of-of-of" should be "my senses finely tune the instruments of-of-of"
"out of my mind, 'cause no lovin fair" should be "out of my mind, there's no love in there" -- it's the chorus, it's the same every time. It doesn't change on the last two.
and lastly, "I watch my toenails blacken and walk a deadened trance" I believe should be "I watch my toenails blacken and waltz* a deadened trance" but I'm not entirely about this one.
The first two corrections I am entirely positive about, though.