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"A sorrow so" should be "And sorrow sows." This builds the "field of tears" metaphor: seeds of sorrow return a harvest of tears.
I heard "pea green sea" as "peat green sea," but I'm not too sure.
"Eyelids fix" sounds closer to "eyelids affix."
"All laid" is "all allayed."
"A sorrow so" should be "And sorrow sows." This builds the "field of tears" metaphor: seeds of sorrow return a harvest of tears.
I heard "pea green sea" as "peat green sea," but I'm not too sure.
"Eyelids fix" sounds closer to "eyelids affix."
"All laid" is "all allayed."