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I could be wrong but
"We were only 16 by the American dreams Our 9 to 5 jobs were quite a barren scene"
should be
"We were only 16 we're brought American dreams Our 9 to 5 jobs were quite embarrassing"
annndddd
"But I could never fit in with all the (?) you were sensing"
is
"But I could never fit in with all the problems you were sensing"
I could be wrong but
"We were only 16 by the American dreams Our 9 to 5 jobs were quite a barren scene"
should be
"We were only 16 we're brought American dreams Our 9 to 5 jobs were quite embarrassing"
annndddd
"But I could never fit in with all the (?) you were sensing"
is
"But I could never fit in with all the problems you were sensing"