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more corrections:
"take hold of my hand and all will be forgiven" meaning he will forgive her.
during the bridge: "then YOU both realize just how foolish YOU'VE been (both of them are foolish) and you try to make AMENDS, BUT YOU'RE BETTER OFF AS FRIENDS"
THIS SHIT'S POETRY, IT NEEDS TO BE CORRECT
more corrections:
"take hold of my hand and all will be forgiven" meaning he will forgive her.
during the bridge: "then YOU both realize just how foolish YOU'VE been (both of them are foolish) and you try to make AMENDS, BUT YOU'RE BETTER OFF AS FRIENDS"
THIS SHIT'S POETRY, IT NEEDS TO BE CORRECT