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Few corrections to my ears:
Well, since time out of mind, I been lazy
But you kept me fast to the light
And I'm not sure about the first two lines of the last stanza...don't sound quite right to me, but can't make them out
Few corrections to my ears:
Well, since time out of mind, I been lazy
But you kept me fast to the light
And I'm not sure about the first two lines of the last stanza...don't sound quite right to me, but can't make them out