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I found a few errors, which are as follows:
Second verse, where it says "But I'm hiding, no one knows .. they don't" - there should actually be a "where" in front of no one knows.
Third verse, the last four lines should read "Are you fine? I still need to know, that you find, muse in memory."
Other than that, the lyrics are correct.
Such a beautiful song! ^_^
I found a few errors, which are as follows:
Second verse, where it says "But I'm hiding, no one knows .. they don't" - there should actually be a "where" in front of no one knows.
Third verse, the last four lines should read "Are you fine? I still need to know, that you find, muse in memory."
Other than that, the lyrics are correct.
Such a beautiful song! ^_^