Verse 1 Line 6: 'He thought that I give in' should be 'He thought that I'd give in"
Verse 2 Line 2: 'I killed the stranger' should be 'I killed a stranger'
and most VITALLY:
Verse 3 Line 4: 'From the killing jar, and it got me sick' is totally wrong and makes no sense. It's 'From the killing jar and the garden shed'.
Corrections:
Verse 1 Line 6: 'He thought that I give in' should be 'He thought that I'd give in" Verse 2 Line 2: 'I killed the stranger' should be 'I killed a stranger' and most VITALLY: Verse 3 Line 4: 'From the killing jar, and it got me sick' is totally wrong and makes no sense. It's 'From the killing jar and the garden shed'.