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I believe that this part:
"Chained and broken Consumed by the light Farewell to you all I'll be fine Goodbye!"
Should be:
"Chained and broken Consumed by the light Farewell to you all I'll be fine Confined!"
And I think this:
"Knots in my back All hope is lost Say goodbye!"
"Knife's in my back All hope is lost Say goodbye!"
Emphasis on 'think' for both of those. I didn't look this up anywhere else, just the way it sounds to my ear.
I believe that this part:
"Chained and broken Consumed by the light Farewell to you all I'll be fine Goodbye!"
Should be:
"Chained and broken Consumed by the light Farewell to you all I'll be fine Confined!"
And I think this:
"Knots in my back All hope is lost Say goodbye!"
Should be:
"Knife's in my back All hope is lost Say goodbye!"
Emphasis on 'think' for both of those. I didn't look this up anywhere else, just the way it sounds to my ear.