shattering of 'birds' (not verse)
as the 'seasons shift' (not seasoned shifts)
wish a 'sudden' breeze (not soothin')
dress the 'open' skies (not olden)
it's a feather's weight (not ____)
as far as the other blanks go, sounds like 'fores' of our 'fistivores' (fores of our fist-eaters? don't ask me). the last one sounds like muscles in this 'raft'.
great song on a greater album by an even greater artist!
a few changes i'd suggest:
shattering of 'birds' (not verse) as the 'seasons shift' (not seasoned shifts) wish a 'sudden' breeze (not soothin') dress the 'open' skies (not olden) it's a feather's weight (not __ __)
as far as the other blanks go, sounds like 'fores' of our 'fistivores' (fores of our fist-eaters? don't ask me). the last one sounds like muscles in this 'raft'.
great song on a greater album by an even greater artist!