i really love this song, one of my favourite things released recently in this genre. can i make a couple of corrections though?:
in the second verse, i think the third line is missing an 'it', as in 'while i never once condemned it i did not agree' (probably a typo). i also think in the final line, 'fell' should be 'failed' - 'fell' doesn't make any sense.
in the final verse, that last line as you've transcribed it feels awfully anticlimactic, though i can't really imagine what that last word could be. my best guess is a simple 'oh', though that's almost as out of place as 'odd'.
aside from that, i think you've got the whole thing about right. i was thinking about adding these lyrics myself a while ago, but never got round to it.
to repeat myself, this is a genuinely beautiful song, really one of the best things i've heard in a while.
i really love this song, one of my favourite things released recently in this genre. can i make a couple of corrections though?:
aside from that, i think you've got the whole thing about right. i was thinking about adding these lyrics myself a while ago, but never got round to it.
to repeat myself, this is a genuinely beautiful song, really one of the best things i've heard in a while.