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@tomStrangelove
I caught some goofs not big ones but some that are inconsistent.
1) In the second block, line #5 :"and redirect this"...you don't really need the "this" in this line as it is already in the next one.
2) In the fourth block, line #1: " Our dog dog will drink"...you have an extra "dog" should be just one.
3) In the fifth block, line #1: "But we'l see"...should be "we'll" you are missing the last "l" in that word.
4) In the sixth block, line#4: "when we killed her sound"...should be "when we killed the sound".
All in all you did a great job just gotta fix those little goofs. :)
@tomStrangelove
I caught some goofs not big ones but some that are inconsistent.
1) In the second block, line #5 :"and redirect this"...you don't really need the "this" in this line as it is already in the next one.
2) In the fourth block, line #1: " Our dog dog will drink"...you have an extra "dog" should be just one.
3) In the fifth block, line #1: "But we'l see"...should be "we'll" you are missing the last "l" in that word.
4) In the sixth block, line#4: "when we killed her sound"...should be "when we killed the sound".
All in all you did a great job just gotta fix those little goofs. :)