"The cannery fellows would follow her everywhere [...] with their hearts all aglow from her icy back-at-you stare when her teeth became tight when her eyes couldn't see."
re: silverbaal's comments, I think this sounds more like the guys are harassing or just mocking her... the point being (I venture) that she just has to suck it up and carry on.
"The cannery fellows would follow her everywhere [...] with their hearts all aglow from her icy back-at-you stare when her teeth became tight when her eyes couldn't see."
re: silverbaal's comments, I think this sounds more like the guys are harassing or just mocking her... the point being (I venture) that she just has to suck it up and carry on.