and although you were right about that one, you were wrong about these:
• i think it's "demonstrates make your haste for the sun", not "may make haste".
• "made seen by heights" is something like "they've seen my eyes".
• "how do you feel about the violet of your lens" is wrong. could be "when the clouds become your hair"
• "i lost my days" should be "i've lost my faith".
thanks though! much of what you got i could never make out, so you're super good!
and although you were right about that one, you were wrong about these: • i think it's "demonstrates make your haste for the sun", not "may make haste". • "made seen by heights" is something like "they've seen my eyes". • "how do you feel about the violet of your lens" is wrong. could be "when the clouds become your hair" • "i lost my days" should be "i've lost my faith".
thanks though! much of what you got i could never make out, so you're super good!