It should be "Love is not these belongings that surround me" not surroundings.
It's ". . .was the loudest sound I never heard" not ever heard.
It's "I'll be fine if I don't look around me now, too much for whats gone" not that much for whats gone
And finally, it's "If only I can stay hear just a little while - - and let time pass in my room" not If only I could wait here.
It should be "Love is not these belongings that surround me" not surroundings. It's ". . .was the loudest sound I never heard" not ever heard. It's "I'll be fine if I don't look around me now, too much for whats gone" not that much for whats gone And finally, it's "If only I can stay hear just a little while - - and let time pass in my room" not If only I could wait here.
I think thats all the errors