"this blank god" should be "this blanket."
"mace with moonlight" should be "laced with moonlight."
"but i let my old self go," should be, "lord i'd let my old self go, and i'd grow."
you also left out "if we drive, til the night ends" that comes during "and we're miles from ordinary."
and also alysenn's correction, and those would be right.
sorry for being so picky,
it's just that this is one of my all time favorite songs ;)
"this blank god" should be "this blanket." "mace with moonlight" should be "laced with moonlight." "but i let my old self go," should be, "lord i'd let my old self go, and i'd grow." you also left out "if we drive, til the night ends" that comes during "and we're miles from ordinary." and also alysenn's correction, and those would be right.
sorry for being so picky, it's just that this is one of my all time favorite songs ;)