Thanks! I would have posted these myself, but I couldn't figure out the "A castle..." line. And the "If you give this... up" line, but I'm still not convinced that it's "life". And that's what I had for the "Everything you took, every laughter, the whole earth shook", but that sounds weird too.
Are these from your ears, or from Josiah, or etc.? Just want to know, because of course if they're from Josiah there's nothing to argue about, and I'll shut up, lol.
But idk, I'm just still kinda iffy on those 2 parts.
But yeah, nice job.
Awesome imagery in this song, at least to me. And also symbolism, because I don't think the imagery is supposed to be literal. But yeah, I'm not too good with what the symbols actually symbolize, so I'm not too much help, lol.
Thanks! I would have posted these myself, but I couldn't figure out the "A castle..." line. And the "If you give this... up" line, but I'm still not convinced that it's "life". And that's what I had for the "Everything you took, every laughter, the whole earth shook", but that sounds weird too.
Are these from your ears, or from Josiah, or etc.? Just want to know, because of course if they're from Josiah there's nothing to argue about, and I'll shut up, lol.
But idk, I'm just still kinda iffy on those 2 parts.
But yeah, nice job.
Awesome imagery in this song, at least to me. And also symbolism, because I don't think the imagery is supposed to be literal. But yeah, I'm not too good with what the symbols actually symbolize, so I'm not too much help, lol.
Peace.