Some of you should be careful (eg: liyano89, electricocean1336, gwenny, dasrite, x-xanti-lovex-x). Mirah doesn't tend to be with men, so why not use the female pronouns?
I like the line "Some fruits evolved all on their own". Nice reference, along with continent dividing (pangea), to evolutionary biology! I don't think this conveys her "growing stronger", but instead forming new parts her her life that are worthwhile and separate from that old relationship.
Some of you should be careful (eg: liyano89, electricocean1336, gwenny, dasrite, x-xanti-lovex-x). Mirah doesn't tend to be with men, so why not use the female pronouns?
I like the line "Some fruits evolved all on their own". Nice reference, along with continent dividing (pangea), to evolutionary biology! I don't think this conveys her "growing stronger", but instead forming new parts her her life that are worthwhile and separate from that old relationship.
Other than that, I think dasrite got it :)