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"it stumbled out lost, and without a pause i'm stung as i was, still i stomped it"
is incorrect, "i'm stung" should be "unstung"
also
"these few presidents frowning in my pocket"
the 'few presidents' are dollar notes? or is that obvious ;)
"it stumbled out lost, and without a pause i'm stung as i was, still i stomped it"
is incorrect, "i'm stung" should be "unstung"
also
"these few presidents frowning in my pocket"
the 'few presidents' are dollar notes? or is that obvious ;)