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few more corrections ive noticed:
...on consumer grade video at night
...and cursing racing horses on chariot steps (maybe)
...did anyone hear me cry there through a toilet stall divider
...under robin's eggs in a nest, you hid a manila envelope with one last little robin's egg in it
...a hollow bullet yet spent
...could be called my missed calls
almost 100% sure on all of these.
few more corrections ive noticed:
...on consumer grade video at night
...and cursing racing horses on chariot steps (maybe)
...did anyone hear me cry there through a toilet stall divider
...under robin's eggs in a nest, you hid a manila envelope with one last little robin's egg in it
...a hollow bullet yet spent
...could be called my missed calls
almost 100% sure on all of these.